Unfound

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Sage Rose (the Zone BBS remains forever my home page) on Monday, 18-Jun-2007 13:32:10

The bottle spins
It bounces down a jagged cliff
It breaks
The fragments swirl in the grasp of the wind
To the place where your heart is frozen
The icy fingers strangling the light
Which is why The air is hard to breathe
And the sun doesn’t smile
For you
For anyone that lingers there
So I left
No imprints
But faded memories
On the wind
Unfound.

Post 2 by lauralou (Account disabled) on Monday, 18-Jun-2007 14:02:55

that was good

Post 3 by Miss Gorgeous (I'm going for the prolific poster awards!) on Sunday, 15-Jul-2007 22:25:44

Nice poem. pretty descriptive, and a clear message.